Nancy, warm Internet hugs and many thanks for having me here today. If I
seem a bit befuddled, it’s because my novella, Those Violet Eyes, was released yesterday by The Wild Rose Press. This
story is part of the Honky Tonk Hearts series. Last April, a call went out from
the publisher for stories with one pivotal scene set in the Lonesome Steer
honky tonk, or bar.
Lonely hearts seem to gravitate to the Lonesome
Steer Honky Tonk.
Owner and bartender, Gus Rankin, has seen his share
of the wandering souls
cross his bar and dance floor over the
years—he’d even like to think he helped
a few find true love along the way.
I’d never written for a series before and thought I’d enjoy giving
it a try. The challenge of writing a story within given parameters appealed to
me, for some reason. But, believe me, as I struggled here and there, I wondered
what I’d been drinking when I’d started this project.
My hero was wounded in Iraq, losing part of his leg. He
also suffered from post traumatic stress disorder. At times he was quiet and
sullen—even to me. So I had to study this condition that affects so many young
adults returning from Iraq
and Afghanistan.
Gaining all this information wasn’t so easy for this grandma. My own grandson
is serving in Afghanistan,
you see. In fact, there might even be a smidgen of my Joshua in Win Fairchild.
Joshy—and I’m the only one he allows
to call him that—is a delightful blend of ornery humor and macho attitude.
My heroine, Evie, was the first of my heroines to saunter across my
computer screen, fully formed and carrying her own dose of attitude. I usually
have a hard time grasping the essence of my heroines, for some reason, but not
Evie. She marched right up to me in her pink cowgirl boots, put her hands on
her hips and said, “I’m telling you right off I’m not putting up with any guff
out of this guy. I’m not in the mood for it.” She made me laugh out loud then
and so many places in the story.
BLURB:
Evie Caldwell hoards every penny for her escape from the servitude
life created by a worthless brother and the endless work on a ranch that will
never be hers. The last thing she wants is a muscled man with a macho Marine
attitude complicating her life. But, oh, how that man can make her insides do a
twitchy thing.
Wounded vet, Win Fairchild, returns to Texas to heal, find a piece of his soul and
open a ranch for amputee children. Finding someone to love was not on his
agenda. Nor was dealing with a wildcat, until she captures his heart with those
violet eyes.
But now that he knows what he wants, can Win convince Evie to stay
in Texas—and
his bed?
OPENING SCENE
EXCERPT:
Win Fairchild
leaned his low-rider onto the gravel parking lot of the Lonesome Steer on a
cloud of dust and a tank of fumes. He eased his modified Harley to a stop next
to the door of the honky tonk and stood. After more than five hundred miles of
bone-jarring road, Win stretched, trying to work the kinks from his body.
A couple came
barreling out of the bar, startling Win who pivoted to nod in greeting. The man
charging ahead, red-faced with clenched fists, was clearly pissed. The woman
behind him carried her own dose of attitude on shoulders muscled from hard work
or hours spent in a gym.
“I’m tired of
you huntin’ me down, Evie, embarrassin’ me in front of my buddies. You act more
like my wife than my sister.”
“And you act
more like an irresponsible child than my older brother. Grow up. I need help at
the ranch.” She planted her hands on jean-clad hips. “Dooley Caldwell, don’t
you walk away from me while I’m talking to you!” Her brother raised an
offensive finger over his head and kept striding toward a Jeep.
The woman
swept her eyes toward Win, as if she suddenly realized he stood next to her,
taking in the heated exchange.
Violet.
Violet eyes
that tugged him into their depths.
His
dust-covered tongue rolled into a tight knot.
“Well, what
the hell are you staring at?”
Good God, her
eyes were like magnets. “Those beautiful eyes of yours.” Win winced at the lack
of polish in his remark. Damn if he didn’t sound like an awkward teenager.
The
dark-haired woman blinked those mesmerizing eyes and then jerked her pointy
chin to the helmet under his arm. “Hunh. Just what the world needs, Don Juan on
a Harley.” She turned on her heel and marched toward an old red Nova, the paint
splotchy and faded.
Win pursed
his lips and exhaled a long breath. He did like a spirited woman. With her
violet eyes, nine feet of attitude crammed into a petite frame and a
make-his-palms-itch-to-touch behind, she was one fine package.
To his
surprise and amusement, she crawled head first through the open window of her
car, that world-class ass shimmying as she wiggled her way onto her driver’s
seat. What a sight. He shifted his stance to accommodate his body’s reaction.
Her car door
must be broken, and he briefly wondered why her brother didn’t fix it for her.
Just then the Wrangler eased to a stop in front of Win.
“Stop starin’
at my sister.” Dooley Caldwell peeled out leaving Win in a shower of dust and
gravel.
His gaze slid
to Evie backing her rusty car away from the Lonesome Steer. He shook his head,
hoping to erase the whirlwind sensation one encounter with the feminine dynamo
created. Maybe moving here held more possibilities than he planned.
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Great excerpt, Vonnie. Thanks for visiting today and best wishes for great sales with Those Violet Eyes.
Thanks so much for having me here today, Nancy. I'm eager to meet everyone.
ReplyDeleteAhh. I love that opening scene. Best of luck with Those Violet Eyes, Vonnie, though you won't need it. Evie and Win's love story is sure to entertain and melt romantic hearts.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mac. You're always so supportive. Writing Evie and Win's story was a lot of fun.
ReplyDeleteI do love this scene! If all your books begin with a punch- I'm hooked for life gal! Congrats on your release darlin'.
ReplyDeleteSaying hi, Vonnie. My thanks to Mac and Calisa for stopping by.
ReplyDeleteCalisa, I write my beginnings and then pare it down, often more than I like. It doesn't come easy. Rewrite, rewrite...and rewrite again. I'm still struggling with my opening scene in my current WIP. I've got nearly 40,000 words written and yet I keep going back and fiddling with that opening scene. Thanks for stopping by.
ReplyDeleteWhen I read your stories, they seem effortlessly entertaining to me - the mark of a truly gifted writer. I love how each of your characters have their own distinctive personalities - their backgrounds shaping who they are. I can't wait for the next releases. In the meantime, I'll re-read Storm and Violet Eyes - gee, what a hardship! ;)
ReplyDeleteOh, LaVerne, you know how to make me feel like filet mignon when I'm more like a can of sardines. LOL Thanks hon.
DeleteHi Vonnie,
ReplyDeleteOh I knew exactly how you were feeling when you were struggling and wondering why you wanted to write for a series. I had the same issues when writing my story for the Love Letters series. I'd do it again in a heat beat though and I'm sure you feel the same way.
Loved your excerpt.
Katherine, this is too wild. I have a story in the Love Letter series, too. Mine won't be out until the end of October, so I have a long wait. I agree, although difficult, writing for a series was a great learning experience.
DeleteMorning again for me, ladies.
ReplyDeleteVonnie, huge thanks for visiting and bringing 'Violet'. I hope the sales are great. You maybe had some trying moments while writing for the series, but it has to have good results when the customers come back for th enext in the series. Best wishes!
Vonnie, this sounds super, as does the series. It's now in my kindle. :)
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